tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2237763176592473009.post4097084801128387942..comments2024-03-27T04:13:40.875-03:00Comments on Poetas de Marte: Poema de trabalhadorDaniel Andradehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05441215022479002438noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2237763176592473009.post-10164771295743972212012-02-26T15:03:31.639-03:002012-02-26T15:03:31.639-03:00Valeu pela crítica construtiva, prezado amigo! Con...Valeu pela crítica construtiva, prezado amigo! Contudo a ideia que quis passar era justamente que o dia terminaria!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16354574682017453497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2237763176592473009.post-75986872165667150622012-02-26T15:02:07.487-03:002012-02-26T15:02:07.487-03:00Obrigado, cara amiga!Obrigado, cara amiga!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16354574682017453497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2237763176592473009.post-83223748121559137402012-02-26T12:03:54.629-03:002012-02-26T12:03:54.629-03:00Ficou legal.
Talvez o círculo pudesse continuar, ...Ficou legal.<br /><br />Talvez o círculo pudesse continuar, dando a idéia de que no outro dia continua a mesma coisa, num ciclo infinito.<br /><br /><br />Abraço.Fabio Baptistahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07077787109941423849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2237763176592473009.post-61591609518330267552012-02-25T23:24:49.843-03:002012-02-25T23:24:49.843-03:00Noite, dia; sol, tempo; na labuta, adoece; a boc...Noite, dia; sol, tempo; na labuta, adoece; a boca anoitece; e a solidão no entardecer.<br />Gostei do mosaico-poético-circular... Uma boa "brincadeira" com as palavras dispostas.<br /><br />;)Canto da Bocahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17530687401786657174noreply@blogger.com